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[ in my headcanon Chara is a girl, but how ever the she/her thing can be changed to them in the actual game so please no one say it's them, or he, or anything please? ]

[After having spared Temmie]

[“Your Only Tem” plays] U…….U kind human!  You have spared me? ....but it's….I-It's not common around here!

If...if...if You do that too much Human You get killed by big scary monsters….but...Do nut Worry!! Me tem Will Help  through Twaps!

But first, follow me! Hooman but mah Tem flakes can help lead you if you're lost!


Temmie and Chara enter the first room of the ruins and Temmies turns his head down shaking

Tem: Tem no Like, Them very scared, very Very Scared!

[TEMMIE'S TUTORIAL]

You wonder who could have done that, and after having understood you begin to shakeTemmie was smiling when he seen the human getting close to him stopping him from shaking


Temmie: Hooman! I will teach you something you must never forget!, the wins are full of puzzles. They are an amalgamate, that in which means they are a mixture of booth keys and subterfuges, it is necessary to resolve them to progress but If you get them wrong, you could die Hueman!! And you need to know that you could see a lot of them! So be careful for Tem!


 On the sign it should be written : Whomever shall be reading this, and going through a new adventure through the ruins, please take care, this place is dangerous, and is no place fit for a normal bystander. Please take this scripture into consideration.  

[dialogue box] : “It is signed with a footprint drawn in ink,

.”

[spikes and switches corridor]

Temmie : In this area, you need to flip the switches to make the spikes go bye-bye but don't worry!, i have marked the right switches so nothing unexpected or wanted will happen Fwiend!!

[if you don't flip the first switch but instead go directly  talk to temmie he’ll be confused and then he’ll say

Temmie:  “the switches are on the wall, do you need Glasses to see…..them confused now?”]

[ if you do the same thing again Temmie will make a comment about your, poor eyesight )

Temmie: Human does need glasses?....human have glasses now!

( then from here it would be optional to wear them, and they really don't do anything for the game what so ever, it just makes the charter cuter )

Temmie would smile once the Switch is now on

Temmie:  Perfect! Now the other one!! So we could get Hooman Home!!

[two switches can be seen, but if you talk to temmie before pressing any]

Temmie: go get the one on the weft pwease, that's the one you need to press human, The left one doesn’t do anything whatsoever

 (*The Temmie gains a demonic face as Chara pressed the Left Switch and a monster jumps out at Chara and the first fight happens, it will be a quick bases as Chara would need to learn, so you would need to catch up on how this world works pretty fast )


[if you flip the right switch] *spikes goes away and Temmie gets a mad, pissed off face *

Temmie : H-H-Hueman I guess I-I-I was wrong wasn’t I?...l...l...wet's keep going on our temptastic adventure!


[ if you Pressed the switch that would have made the spikes go away in the first place  Temmie will get angry and triggered so and he would think to himself ]

Temmie: how did they know?!, they pressed the wrong lever, and still gotten passed the monster!, oh great just what i wanted, whoop de freakin’ doo!! ‘

[The dummy]

Temmie: Fr…….Fr….Fwiend!! you….y...You need to twain!....so !Here's A Training  dummy, he won't do anything to you, he…..he’s not alive!!!

Temmie gave a evil look, as he laughed maniacally ( thoughts: What an idiotic gullible human!!, They are so weak I could just hurl right now, but I gotta keep this up. At least after they make it out of the Ruins. Then everything will be right. )

Temmie then made himself look stressed again as he started to focus on Chara again

Temmie:  hooman! I-instead of looking at me, twain! That way you could be ready for intense battles!

*automatic battle with an angry looking dummy “sleeping”


* [“aggravation” plays]dummy : ...who dares disturb me in my sleep I NEED TO SLEEP BUT YOU HORRIBLE!! EVIL CREATURE DARED TO WAKE ME UP!!?!! I'M GOING TO BREAK YOU IN PIECES HUMAN! NYAHAHAHHAHAHAH!!!! I WILL HAVE YOUR SOUL!!

*dummy launches a knife that was on fire


Dummy:  I-I HAVE KNIVES NYAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA.... [you dodge the knife] I-I don't have knives anymore.... [then a fireball out of nowhere] what ??


*it breaks the dummy, as it makes some of his stuff explode out of his side making the Dummy scream in pain as He ran off


*end of the battle*

Temmie : was very confused as he turned his head as he heard gigantic Footprints on the ground, and slowly a black shadow was there, no music, no colored sprite, no nothing but a black shape but as he walked closer into the room, he seemed to had been...smiling as he stopped smiling upon coming into the room

[“A Watchful Eye” plays] Asgore: oh my…...I am so sorry child…..I had no clue such an innocent cute little fellow like you fell down….. But do tell me, what are you doing in such a dangerous place like this? Hmm you must be so confused..?..Allow me to present myself, I am Asgore,the  Guardian of these Ruins. I know, You may seem lost.... But let me  guide you through this ruined place, it is indeed pretty dangerous if you're also-


Asgore noticed Temmie and Gave him a funny look ....

Asgore: Oh, howdy there.. I didn’t notice YOU were here..

T E M M I E


Temmie : U-Ummm…... Hoi? .. .


Asgore : Human, whatever you do, stay close to me, Now please may we set off?

Chara the player nods their head and would proceed to go to Asgore as Asgore made a new fire ball as he was looking at Temmie with disgust

Asgore: I know what you are truly trying to do foul one , So I will give you one last chance, my final, FINAL warning. So please, take this as an act of Mercy, because the next time we meet, you, Will,D I E!

Temmie :No fair! Why you have to….be so mean to Temmie?...

Temmie looked sad as he started to walk away, as he looked back one more time and ran off as he was evilly happy

(DRATS!!, I will Find you again Human, and when I Do, I WILL PERSONALLY RIP YOU INTO A MILLION BLOODY PIECES, And then I’ll do it over and over again!! ) *then fades away*

[“Ruined” plays] Asgore : Now i know for a fact that you might be scared right now child, but please allow me to truthfully teach you how things REALLY work down here, I can show you how to fight properly, How to give ‘love’ and not ‘LOVE’, how to give mercy as opposed to harm, along with help for certain puzzles Along with your own brand new home, young one.  



There is supposed to be a sign reading “These are false spikes, go on, nothing will happen ”

To go through here you need to speak to Asgore, who will be blocking the pikes

Asgore: These aren’t real spikes, but however I want you to feel comfortable so why not follow me little one?


You would then automatically follow Asgore until you get passed all of the spikes*

Chara shook her head as they started to go into a room with a long hall way, on the walls there was a crack on the wall, while there was a small temmie sized hole, that seemed to have eyes staring at the charters Soul, as if they knew something was going to happen but Asgore cleared his throat

Asgore: My Child I need to test how independent you are, so I need you to run to the end of the hallway, I’ll be right here, however child I will still be making sure you're safe just in case,

Chara walked to the end of the hallway with no issues but she stop to take a look at the hole in the wall to see there was claw marks over it, some vines and some other forms of life living off of this wall but they reached the end of the hallway as Asgore smiled as he walked up to chara

Asgore: my dearest innocent child, I need you to stay here for a little bit, it is so I can go shopping and get supplies for us tonight, but once I get back Ill bring us back to our Manor and there we can discuss rules, and…….

Asgore trailed off as he shook his head and he coughed

Asgore: just dont leave young one please, and if you find Temmie, DO NOT go near him,

Asgore gives the player a cellphone

Asgore: if you need help with a puzzle, or help with any monsters call me please human

Asgore then walked off as Chara shortly afterwards goes to the puzzles, so the first room she entered was a room filled with Rose’s and on the wall was some vines, a flower bed, a few froggit statues where next to a few flower beds

Walking into this new room filled you with determination as she went into the room, a door right next to the other one and seen a candy bowl, but it had only….tiny pieces of candy so depending on how many you take this is the result

( one piece: its a small piece of monster caramel……)

( two pieces: You're a horrible demon, two pieces! )

( three Pieces: Stop now you're getting greedy )

( last piece: look at what you done, you dropped all of the candy on the floor )

( look at candy mess: Looking at this mess fills you with regrets )

As you're about to leave the room you get a fun little call from Asgore

Asgore: howdy my child, i am calling to check up on you….you haven’t gotten into trouble have you?

( if no )

Asgore: that's marvelous my child, i just wanted to check up on you….and please don’t knock over the candy bowl

# Click #

( If yes )

Asgore:....I believed in you child, but your a child after all so i forgive you, it is not your fault, just…..just don’t do it next time

# Click #

Once Chara goes into this room, she see’s a butterfly floating around, as a gigantic Froggit ( size of bull dog ) was hopping around and Chara felt nervous as she tried to avoid it, but she stepped on a broken piece of stone making it roll and a froggit started to hop towards her, and it was the true first battle,

In order to win this fight you need to pet, rub, flirt, flirt, and be kind too then he would be happy croaking then he would be able to be spared and he would hope away as Chara would now notice she would have some gold so she would place it into her inventory and she would keep on walking through the ruins, and get a feeling that this place used to be happier a long time ago, but now it was a place of true sorrow as puzzles where among them

Chara nervously started to go a room which had a room, with a new puzzle that looked kinda confusing



PUZZLE EXPLANATION: To get through this puzzle, it’s slightly tricky. Back by the savepoint, and up by the stone, the candy bowl , there is a floor tile that looks a bit more different than the others. If you press Z on this tile, the screen shakes. Back at the pit, nothing seems to have changed… except a pathway is drawn on the ground (of course, people are free to just wing it and find a way across otherwise). Once across, they can continue.



After taking a few steps Chara would hear a familiar voice again, and see Temmie would come out of the shadows ears perking up as he would come back up to chara looking at her with sweet innocent looking eyes

Temmie: hoi Hooman!, I thought Asgore Killed uu to death!!!

Temmie seemed upset and scared so you have two options here



Allow Temmie to be in your backpack, or allow him to keep going on and on about being scared


( allow Temmie to go into your backpack, The player would drop her bag on the ground causing Temmie to go into the bag if special sprite work is done, it’ll show everything happen )


Temmie: why….Tank uuu Sooo Much hooman!!, Now Tem Can Help you!


( If no, Chara comforts the temmie with her words…..as this is up to the person to what the human said to the temmie )

Temmie:...uu Hooman think so?.......tank Uuu!! Sooo Much!! Now Tem May go with Hooman to Help tem!!

Afterwords Temmie will be following the player or be chilling in her backpack but they would basically say the same things


So chara walked into a room with a room, with a save point, a piece of cheese, a mouse hole, and a…..rock with a chair with a table, Here you could save, and sit in a chair…...and talk….to temmie…..


( You can flirt, Threaten, Talk, Call cute, or say Hi to temmie )

( Flirty with temmie he cowers away undeath the table )

Temmie: ( thoughts ) I am going to rip this kids guts out for flirting with me!!

Temmie looked at Chara innocently and looked down

Temmie: Uuu Flirt with Tem?.....Tem no like…..Tem beg no do

( if call threaten )

Temmie:  ( thoughts ) What the Hell just gotten into this Damn Kid?!, their showing mercy and now they threaten to KILL ME!?!?!? I WILL EAT THEIR HEART ON A STICK!!! AS I WILL BUILD A NEST INSIDE OF THEIR BODY!!

Temmie doesn’t say anything to Chara

( if call cute )

Temmie laughs evilly to himself

Temmie: ( thoughts ) I can easily brain-wash this kid, and kill them once i am sure Asgore isn’t around me at all

Temmie then coughs and looks at Chara sweetly

Temmie: tank Uuuuuu!!!! Soooo Mooooch Human!! Tank uu!!

( Saying hi to Temmie )

Temmie: Hi….Hooman

( that is all )

After you leave this Cheese, rock, and…..well the very boring room you would get too a simple rock room…..with just one rock that you would need to take care of, this rock would actually be mean and cruel to the player it soon gets to a point where temmie threatens the rock that he’ll move


( Dialogue )

Rock: I ain’t moving for You Child, I don’t even have a pebble of gratitude or sympathy for you whatsoever, so why should I I move? That’s what I thought.

( take 2 )

Rock: What still bothering me?....keep it up, and it’ll be a one way ticket to pain town.

( take 3 )

Rock: Don’t test me brat! I’m warning you, the moment you try me you’re gonna be in a world of hurt!

( take 4 )

Temmie: Hooman!!, let me teke of hom!!

Chara would be forced to leave the room as you would control temmie for this one cut scene


Temmie:....Heya, buddy…..if you don’t move even an inch, well…...I’ll make sure you’ll end up like your cousin’s who got smashed into bits!, Is this clear?

Rock:...Y...Y…..Yes…S..Sorry, allow me to move out of your way.

The rock went over to the pressure plate and started to make it self stand there as Temmie went back to acting innocent

Temmie: tanks uu ah loot!!.....

The player would re-enter the room as the rock seemed to be sweating but Temmie would playful lead the player away from the room into a room filled with flowers filled with all different sorts of colors so Temmie laughed evilly as he started to speak up to chara

Tem: Hoooman!!!!, Flowr room scary!!, died a loot of munsters!!




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Shout Out!!

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DreemGemini 

she is the lovely woman doing my Amanda commission, so i thought she should get a big shout out, so go to her arts works and love on them please 
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I am looking for someone to, commission so they can draw out my UnderTale OC for at least 120 Points 

and i would need them very soon, so tell me your prices, and how long it might take you 

and here is a reference sheet

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